Mila’s Reviews > Wolfen > Status Update

Yeah no. Really can't do this. Dnf

“Because she was an idiot.” Excerpt From: Madelaine, Montague. “Wolfen.” Finally

This book used an exclamation mark 716 times. Not even joking. My E reader tells me so.

“You're an alpha female,” he murmured, his voice husky with a promise that evoked a startling rise of heat inside of her in response." Don't think so. Mentally handicap maybe.

I get that it's an erotica, but an erotica doesn't mean bad writing is fine as long as there's sex. How did this get through the publisher?

But then suddenly she's going to find wolf in the forest?? Didn't she get woken up from bed because of the loud music and wants the biker to turn it down? Why is she saying that she must go find the wolf tonight? The chronological order of this book doesn't make sense.

I'm trying okay. Since I already have this book anyway... Damn it

DNF

“The name's Balin."  The voice was the deep rumble of a high testosterone male and it sent a wave of prickling sensation through Danika that she dimly recognized as a purely feminine reaction to an attractive male.” Excerpt From: Madelaine, Montague. “Wolfen.” Cringed worthy dialog.

“Her ears felt as if they'd elongated with the intensity of their focus on the men.” Excerpt From: Madelaine, Montague. “Wolfen.” What is this? What the hell does that even mean???