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Uh-oh.... Talk of a perky blondes moist panties in the first paragraph.... So Not What I expect or want in my m/m books!!!
— May 01, 2016 08:31AM
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A "fat potato shaped looking dick".... LMAO! No thanks.... I do believe that I am done torturing myself with this ..... DNF!
— May 02, 2016 07:34AM
Pati
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Damn! Grammar folks!!!! "Sarge watched fascinated at his men..." Ugh!!!!! Sadly another waste of money, I'm afraid. I began reading this yesterday morning and yet I'm only now at 15%. This thing just can't grab my attention. Too much flowery description of minor things and bad grammar.
— May 02, 2016 07:30AM
Pati
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"It would not be long before they arose, ready for the night."..... Give me a break! This from a southern born American Marine?!?!! It'd be more realistic and believable saying 'It wouldn't be long before they woke up raring to go.' Or something else along those lines.
— May 02, 2016 07:19AM
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*sigh* sigh* sadly once again a book set in America using non-American grammar. *sigh* We call them restaurants NOT eateries!!!! And we say " I haven't" NOT "I've not"!!!!
— May 01, 2016 10:24AM