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Pati
is 16% done
Life is too short... I should have known to stick with my previous decision not to bother even though I had already spent the money. Not only do I have problems with the grammatical errors and sentence structure of some of the sentences which keep distracting me from the story but This is no way to introduce anyone into the BDSM lifestyle... No way to behave at all on a first date.... DNF
— May 03, 2016 06:26AM
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Pati
is 10% done
Ummm... "A bit as fear wound its way through him." Is NOT a grammatically correct sentence. SMH.
— May 02, 2016 09:01PM
Pati
is starting
Ok. I said that I was no longer going to read this author and will probably regret this... However, I just realized that this is on my Kindle. I must have preordered it then forgot. Which is common for me. Sooooo, here goes.
— May 02, 2016 07:58AM
