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Caterina
is 19% done
I'm liking this book mostly but there is something I don't like about it.
When things are bad for a mc they don't tell the other that. They try to be brave and hide that. In this book she tells the mmc that things are worse than she is letting on and she has a lot of trauma. It would be more appealing if everything weren't spelled out. Keep it subtle and intriguing.
— Dec 05, 2024 11:02AM
When things are bad for a mc they don't tell the other that. They try to be brave and hide that. In this book she tells the mmc that things are worse than she is letting on and she has a lot of trauma. It would be more appealing if everything weren't spelled out. Keep it subtle and intriguing.
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Caterina
is 38% done
It's just gotten so much worse. I can't stress enough that the story is told by what you leave out as much as what you add in.
This is a dnf
— Dec 06, 2024 12:33AM
This is a dnf
