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The writing is awful. The author doesn’t know basic details. Like putting the “baby” in the motorized swing? She’s over a year old.
The dialogue is awful and superficial. Don’t get me started on the overly descriptive toddler/esque adjectives used to describe every setting.
The story would be great. The book just needs a lot of work. 😭
— Dec 05, 2024 04:29PM
The writing is awful. The author doesn’t know basic details. Like putting the “baby” in the motorized swing? She’s over a year old.
The dialogue is awful and superficial. Don’t get me started on the overly descriptive toddler/esque adjectives used to describe every setting.
The story would be great. The book just needs a lot of work. 😭
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Dec 05, 2024 08:42PM
Love this. Nothing is more annoying when it’s blatantly obvious the author is an idiot and/or did zero research.
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