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niels.
is 40% done
This seems like a passion project and I'm proud of the author selfpublishing the book but man it's rough.
Dialogue is horrible. Characters have as much dimension as a sheet of paper. Almost halfway done and it gets harder with every page. Almost dropped it immediately.
If you consider the first Eragon book derivative, this book will make it seem like the pinnacle of originality.
Hate to dislike this one but ughhh.
— Dec 08, 2024 03:19PM
Dialogue is horrible. Characters have as much dimension as a sheet of paper. Almost halfway done and it gets harder with every page. Almost dropped it immediately.
If you consider the first Eragon book derivative, this book will make it seem like the pinnacle of originality.
Hate to dislike this one but ughhh.
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niels.
is 80% done
Reaching cartoonish levels digga i can't es liest sich wie ne Eragon fanfic die ich in der 4. Klasse geschrieben habe
— Dec 11, 2024 03:24PM
niels.
is 80% done
Dialogue still painful to read. Powerscaling that would make some shōnen manga jealous. His hair is still wet from the womb why is he a spellslinger and a great swordsman after spending a week with those guys. Yet, the fight scenes are still kind of bad and bland.
Almost feels like a parody because it's so derivative. Eragon got his brisingr so this guy got.... ICE? Sword dance is so fatf coded. Idk man painful
— Dec 11, 2024 02:53PM
Almost feels like a parody because it's so derivative. Eragon got his brisingr so this guy got.... ICE? Sword dance is so fatf coded. Idk man painful
niels.
is 60% done
bipolar people have less mood swings in a week than the characters in this book have over the course of a single paragraph
(I would know)
— Dec 09, 2024 03:32PM
(I would know)