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Two ladies, both wearing a “chignon,” and I can’t help but wonder why the author is so fixated on that hairstyle.
This book has a somewhat amateurish feel to it, as if a 16-year-old was tasked with writing a short story and, in their attempt to use as many words as possible, neglected the importance of developing the characters and plot.
— Dec 09, 2024 07:19AM
This book has a somewhat amateurish feel to it, as if a 16-year-old was tasked with writing a short story and, in their attempt to use as many words as possible, neglected the importance of developing the characters and plot.
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I’m on page 24 and this book has given me whiplash with the amount of characters, yet such little development. It’s hard to be interested and I’m trying to push through, but this writing style is not my favorite.
— Dec 09, 2024 07:15AM
