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Jo Watson
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Still can’t keep POV or characters in the room straight.
— Dec 13, 2024 11:23PM
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Jo Watson
is on page 177 of 206
“Jack will be so to see you”. I guess it’s not necessary to have all the words. I’m guessing this is an editing mistake. Do Kindle Unlimited books even have editors?
— Dec 13, 2024 11:03PM
Jo Watson
is on page 170 of 206
I feel like Griffin needs to admit why he broke up with Sierra and that he always had feelings for her even during his marriage and why he married his wife. Still being very vague and cagey.
— Dec 13, 2024 10:52PM
Jo Watson
is on page 148 of 206
They seem to have given up on identifying whose point of view the chapter is being told from.
— Dec 13, 2024 10:07PM
Jo Watson
is on page 68 of 206
The author can’t keep the name of the female main character straight. In one page it goes from being Sierra Harper to Sierra Bennet.
— Dec 12, 2024 10:45PM

