Aly Ray’s Reviews > The Night and Its Moon > Status Update

there’s more context to the racist trope critiques I’ve seen about this but still something to be said about it (a succubus, really?!) but the poor writing critique is 100%. Piper must think her reader forgets everything they’ve ever said because if she casually mentions the fae kid with big eyes ONE MORE TIME OK WE GET IT. Anyway I’m still toughin it out for the drama so wish me luck