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Deanna
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How is it that I'm reading two different books BOTH with mother figures drugging and manipulating their daughters? Is this the next trend? Gotta say this trend does give a lot of options for drama 🤣 Not sure I'm ok from a normal standpoint but it is juicy🍹
— Jan 01, 2025 04:46PM
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Deanna
is on page 325 of 438
What is HAPPENING?! Jesus, there's NOTHING worse than a wishy-washy FMC who can't COMMIT to anything! That doesn't make her complex, it makes her STUPID.
EVEN her "pro government" DAD is like "nah, who cares. Those bombs r someone else's problem". I actually believe she's mentally unstable. She can't commit to anything and somehow she's not dead yet.
— Jan 22, 2025 02:21PM
EVEN her "pro government" DAD is like "nah, who cares. Those bombs r someone else's problem". I actually believe she's mentally unstable. She can't commit to anything and somehow she's not dead yet.
Deanna
is on page 208 of 438
200 pages and it took this long to get the ball rolling. It started earlier than stopped. The FMC didn't even need much convincing but the author felt she had to make "a tragic event" to start the Hero's Journey which we already had. It didn't mean much to me or FMC because it was already established so why is it happening twice?
— Jan 17, 2025 09:28AM
Deanna
is on page 55 of 438
The writing style is VERY melodramatic. Like something out of a "Days of our Lives" dialogue. FMC has a ridiculous "burning against injustice"....like a 14 year old who thinks she's the next Katniss Everdeen and gunna secretly "fight the power". Not super descriptive which is a shame because the author wants to gush about lore and I'm here for it.
— Nov 16, 2024 07:50PM
