Joy’s Reviews > Daughter of a Promise > Status Update
Joy
is 28% done
I’m miserable and intrigued, but above all I’m horrified because what possesses a woman to include a sex scene in a letter to her unborn son??? I just don’t think this framing is necessary and the constant asides are annoying. Also, why so many characters and unnecessary details? This book needed so much more editing
— Jan 07, 2025 09:04PM
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Joy
is 87% done
I hate the stupid coy wolves please stop mentioning them they serve no real purpose here
— Jan 17, 2025 05:07PM
Joy
is 70% done
Using a worldwide pandemic as a plot device to kill off one character is actually so sick and twisted and to top it all off, it’s uncreative. There were better ways to do this
— Jan 14, 2025 01:22PM