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I might end up DNF'ing this. The writing is clunky, there's no believable tension between the lead characters since they're just drooling over each other all the time, and there are weird plot elements like "the castle rented for cheap because it's haunted" -- wouldn't a lot of people pay MORE to stay in a place rumoured to be haunted? This would be more fun if I weren't wanting to edit every other sentence.
— Jan 08, 2025 05:14PM
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Eilonwy
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I need more clarification. What about Neil's Native characters makes them "palatable" to white readers, and what about Pen's Native characters makes them so threatening to white folks? Neil writes horror for Pete's sake, so how accurate is that supposed to be about anyone? Pen and Neil keep bickering about representation, but the details are so lacking that these arguments are happening in a vacuum for me.
— Jan 09, 2025 04:00AM
