Blue Vhal’s Reviews > One Dark Window > Status Update

i had no clue how they were gonna wrap up the book in one chapter but holy….. highly recommend this book if i could rate it a 6/5 i would

one complaint i have is that the author really likes the word “and” lol. some sentences tend to get repetitive cause of it ;-; like for instance the sentence “the fine smells of soup and meat and bread” could be so much shorter with a few commas lol (not really a complaint lol just a note!)

“it’s practically midday, and on the subject of drink, i’m behind on my daily quotient” LMAO

not gonna talk about what just happened (because ik rose wants to read this lol) but hehe called it >:) what a twist :D

“…unmarked but for one dark window” title drop :o lol

“ik what u r” that shouldn’t be funny but for some reason it is lmaooo-

idk if i typed anything in here but… i was not expecting that twist lol so early in the book too