D.M. Sonntag’s Reviews > The Dawn of Peace > Status Update

As soon as I wrote that the word “ass” got used at least 5 times in this chapter. Also “little one” is not a cute pet name. It’s gross.

Right now I’m unsure if this will be a one star or two. I can’t handle the modern talk, “damn that’s so hot,” I can’t remember the actual quote but Alric said something about seducing her with his “swagger” and they keep checking out each others ass.

This sounds like something I wrote in middle school