D.M. Sonntag’s Reviews > The Dawn of Peace > Status Update

As soon as I wrote that the word “ass” got used at least 5 times in this chapter. Also “little one” is not a cute pet name. It’s gross.

Right now I’m unsure if this will be a one star or two. I can’t handle the modern talk, “damn that’s so hot,” I can’t remember the actual quote but Alric said something about seducing her with his “swagger” and they keep checking out each others ass.

Did this fantasy book really say “rent free”?

This sounds like something I wrote in middle school