Emma Dawson’s Reviews > Metal Slinger > Status Update

Hmm. The overall plot is intriguing and I want to know more. I’m not sure I’m convinced by the romance, but we’ll see. The writing falters sometimes I think - instances of colloquial modern US language are a bit jarring. The worst is when the main character, who has lived in a floating village tribe most of her life, running for her life through enemy lands, dreams of ‘a comfy bed and endless art supplies’.