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is 49% done
🤔 maybe a bit too much telling and not showing? It’s hard to connect to either Andrew or Coley. But that’s probably just me, right? The writing is good, though.
— Jan 12, 2025 02:30PM
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rated it 4 stars
Jan 12, 2025 03:00PM
Nah I agree with you, pretty writing but I didn’t connect either
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@Sarah It feels like such a bummer after reading all these 4/5 stars reviews ☹️
Yeah I know what you mean I gave this 4 as I think I err on being overly generous, but I’ve come to learn it’s bad of me cos gives my fellow readers false impressions