Lizbeth ☆’s Reviews > Tell Me to Stop > Status Update
Lizbeth ☆
is on page 187 of 316
“Before I agreed to spend a year with him…”
So, Charlotte Byrd, you decided to CUT OUT THE BEST FUCKING PART and insert a BLANDDDDDD fucking time skip and ruin all the sexual tension and relationship building for this shit smut scene?!
My rating for this book is officially down to a 2 and half stars. Because that PISSED ME OFF.
— Jan 14, 2025 06:19PM
So, Charlotte Byrd, you decided to CUT OUT THE BEST FUCKING PART and insert a BLANDDDDDD fucking time skip and ruin all the sexual tension and relationship building for this shit smut scene?!
My rating for this book is officially down to a 2 and half stars. Because that PISSED ME OFF.
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Lizbeth ☆
is on page 194 of 316
Okay, Charlotte Byrd, so… that shit time skip you added was “weeks later” whilst on the trip… but prior to going to maui, Olive only took a week off her job… we are reminded of that one week trip duration on page 194. AND OLIVE SAYS THERES STILL DAYS LEFT. SO WHAT IS IT?! WEEKS LATER OR A WEEK?!!!
Now I see why there’s so many bad reviews.
— Jan 14, 2025 06:28PM
Now I see why there’s so many bad reviews.
Lizbeth ☆
is on page 184 of 316
I get there’s a time skip BUT WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS?!!!? YOU GO FROM A EMOTIONALLY DRAINING SCENE TO SMUT?? MIND YOU OLIVE AND NICOLAS WERENT EVEN GONNA SEE EACHOTHER?? BUT THE TIME SKIP IS THEM HAVING SEX?!!? WTF IS THIS!! ITS SO RANDOM!!! 0/10 WHERES THE BUILDUP?! WHERES THE TENSION?! YOU CANT GO FROM THAT TO THIS!!!?!
— Jan 14, 2025 06:06PM
Lizbeth ☆
is on page 113 of 316
“I go through my library trying to find something else to read. Eventually, I turn to another one of my favorites. ITS BY CHARLOTTE BYRD, one of MY FAVORITE WRITERS—“
Don’t miss me off already with the self insert.
It was unnecessary. There’s already so many wasted pages in this book with self promos at the beginning and the end of it. I don’t need a self insert too.
— Jan 14, 2025 05:30PM
Don’t miss me off already with the self insert.
It was unnecessary. There’s already so many wasted pages in this book with self promos at the beginning and the end of it. I don’t need a self insert too.
Lizbeth ☆
is on page 42 of 316
The story is okay so far. But i do have one complaint so far for the book itself. Why is there so many damn ads? Like self promos at the very beginning of the book ANDD the end??! like damn. I get it but you don’t need to waste trees to put it in both places. That and I don’t know if maybe I got a faulty book but mine seems misaligned (text wise). it’s all right leaning. none of it is centered which bothers me
— Jan 13, 2025 08:18PM
