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This is some of the most awkward-but-trying-to-be-sexy dialogue I've read in a while.
— Dec 14, 2011 09:10PM
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Dec 15, 2011 07:20AM
Example, please. :D
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Oh damn, left the book at home (actually finished it last night), but it was all stuff like:"I think I like you, Seneca."
"I think I like you, too, Autumn. I know I love those sexy curves of yours."
"What? My full figure is sexy to you, Seneca?"
"Oh yes, Autumn. Very much. Any man who's worth calling himself one would be lucky to have those curves laying on him...maybe while you made love to him."
"That's very sweet, Seneca. If only my ex-husband hadn't made me feel so terrible about myself."
"Real men love real curves, Autumn."
And yes, they kept repeating the other person's name every. Damn. Sentence.
*blinks* Really? And this is all on the first night they met each other. Oh, and he also showed her pictures of his wife who's been dead for two years. Pictures he keeps in his wallet. And told her how the dead wife was the one true love of his life. Then followed that statement up with how she'd made him promise to fall in love again and how he was ready to have kids now. On their first date.
Wow. No wonder it's not working for you. It reminds me of Richard Bagg's character in Van Wilder. Sooo stilted and awkward.

