Brooke’s Reviews > Death by Coffee > Status Update

"Clearly, I’d watched too many overly dramatic crime dramas in my time." That's an understatement for the main character.

There was a shocked gasp from Andi.

Andi gasped.

Andi gasped.

Andi had her hand over her mouth as if stifling yet another gasp.

"His skin was the color of caramel and there was a slight upward slant to his eyes."

PLEASE STOP DESCRIBING CHARACTERS BY SKIN COLOR/FACIAL FEATURES/HAIR TYPE unless you're doing it for every character -- not the "minority" characters alone. Please. STOP.