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is 2% done
I'm 2% through it....and who are all these people?? The name-dropping is happening at a dizzying rate with little to no explanation on who is who.
— Jan 22, 2025 06:26AM
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is 52% done
What is with all these places? Keeping the names straight for all these regions is giving me a headache. Not to mention the lore associated with each one? Just no. Some of it just doesn't even make any sense.
It's like the author is trying to make a conplex world, but is just typing random words and giving random histories to each one - and not even doing so in a way to keep readers engaged or interested.
— Jan 23, 2025 06:26PM
It's like the author is trying to make a conplex world, but is just typing random words and giving random histories to each one - and not even doing so in a way to keep readers engaged or interested.
