Erica’s Reviews > Onyx Storm > Status Update

I feel like this is written so terribly. Is it just me!? Like I literally read a sentence and then have to go back a few paragraphs to try and figure out what they are even talking about.

I feel like this book was one written based on a movie, like the author is like "the reader already knows what happens, so I'm not going to waste my time introducing new characters or describing what's happening in a meaningful way". It jumps from one thing to the next and very conversation heavy. Often, they'll be full conversations between 3 people and then someone else chimes in and it's like "oh, you're here?"