allysa’s Reviews > Onyx Storm > Status Update
allysa
is 50% done
i almost don’t care about xaden or violet at all at this point— i only care about the dragons, a few side characters, and (hopefully) more world building
— Jan 29, 2025 08:47AM
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allysa
is 90% done
i’m ready for this to be over. desperate to know what happens but the process isn’t that fun anymore
— Feb 04, 2025 01:31PM
allysa
is 70% done
i know its a quick update after the last one but i have to say i am SO disappointed abt the dragons rn. grrrrrrr
— Feb 01, 2025 01:36PM
allysa
is 65% done
was excited for the world building and i am having fun,,, but i’m kind of over the “wow every new society we encounter has these crazy and outlandish trials we have to pass!!” it comes off a little weird. i understand working with unfamiliar customs and unfamiliar gods,, navarre has something similar too…. but dhhhhdhdhshs idk maybe i’m just trying to find things to be annoyed about
— Feb 01, 2025 08:51AM
allysa
is 21% done
why is violet’s inner monologue so cringe… its giving quirky. its giving bad fanfic. i’m very invested don’t get me wrong but i’m also kind of bored
— Jan 26, 2025 01:59PM
