Lisar’s Reviews > Onyx Storm > Status Update
Lisar
is on page 506 of 544
Please tell me WHY in the last 10% we’re now getting POVs of characters that had I donno 5 min page time in the whole book
— Jan 30, 2025 03:54AM
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Lisar
is on page 406 of 544
Nah honestly throwing in a smut scene now that ain’t smutting makes me even angrier now I can’t event - just want to skip it finish it and then erase it from my brain and burn in.
— Jan 30, 2025 12:33AM
Lisar
is on page 400 of 544
Honestly the writing !! It’s like my brain when it doesn’t get enough sleep- oh look there’s something shiny-have to clean the bedroo.. oh have you read this book? Did I turn the oven off? Oh now I remember I am dndkwlxkaöxnxnyjwkwksnsb
— Jan 30, 2025 12:04AM
