ada’s Reviews > Of Witches... > Status Update

2 more stories down and i'm still :/ idk his writing is too simple, i think. there's barely any description, just 99% tell, and when there is it's very standard, doesn't bring you into the emotion of the scene at all. simple, straight forward writing can work, but it still takes effort. it doesn't feel like any effort was put into these stories to make them feel creepy, make the reader feel unnerved . . very bland