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Lilly
is on page 393 of 544
I’ve been enjoying the second half more than the first but now 😭 I just don’t like how now that we’re back at Basgiath it keeps giving us really short scenes and then skipping time. It makes me feel less connected to the story and characters when it does that. The characters barely get to talk and then all of a sudden it’s 3 weeks later. They need to have a discussion not just 2 sentences and then bye.
— Feb 02, 2025 12:31PM
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Lilly
is on page 220 of 544
this one feels faster paced but the progress we’re making on reaching the very important time sensitive goals is soo slow omg. Someone please talk to me about this 😭
— Jan 30, 2025 07:06PM
Lilly
is on page 66 of 544
I feel like the writing is a little different in this one? Idk it just feels like a different vibe. Maybe it’s just because it’s new
— Jan 26, 2025 08:54AM
