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There is also that annoying part where she repeats the same 2 words 30 times. Ok, so it was only 29...

The body switches from her thoughts to his thoughts frequently without much transition so you are frequently confused about why a specific character is having those thoughts.

It reads like a rough draft. The same words are used again and again. He even thinks of himself in terms of "The billionaire CEO of Knight Enterprises" multiple times... Either he has a super ego or it's poor writing.

Not a bad quick read. Story moved a bit to fast and the spice was super lowkey. I'd say half a pep but it was a sweet little story!

cute!