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There is also that annoying part where she repeats the same 2 words 30 times. Ok, so it was only 29...
— Apr 14, 2025 05:37PM
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Sherry
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The body switches from her thoughts to his thoughts frequently without much transition so you are frequently confused about why a specific character is having those thoughts.
— Apr 14, 2025 03:44PM
Sherry
is 43% done
It reads like a rough draft. The same words are used again and again. He even thinks of himself in terms of "The billionaire CEO of Knight Enterprises" multiple times... Either he has a super ego or it's poor writing.
— Apr 14, 2025 03:41PM
