Status Updates From Stone Hearts (War of the Un...

Formatting error

Typo missing question mark, unless this is being said in the inner monologue in a monotone way.

Ngl the amount of typos in this is ridiculous at this point

Typo run-on

This sentence either needs an “in” or “through”, otherwise this sentence just reads weirdly

I’m pretty sure “blown apart boys” should be hyphenated bc it comes right before “boys”

Typo should be “blond” bc he’s male

Typo run-on

OKAY ROLEPLAY LMAO

“Far farther” reads awkwardly

DAMN 403 years later

Typo should be “subtlety” not “subtle”

WHOA WAIT A MINUTE- we've skipped to 84 years in the future

typo run-on

YO-

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MAYDAY BITCHES

typo missing period

typo run-on

typo missing question mark otherwise this is just an awkward sentence

weirdly worded sentence, possibly missing word

Rhiannon is from Welsh mythology and the Morrígan is from Irish mythology. Are the two in the book supposed to be the incarnations of these two, or are these two just named Rhiannon and Morrígan in order to connect the mythologies together?

stop I love them

I’m loving this so far. My only question is that aren’t the sídhe supernatural beings? Not ancient gateways?