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Emma's In Stock is on page 178 of 206

Typo missing question mark, unless this is being said in the inner monologue in a monotone way.

Ngl the amount of typos in this is ridiculous at this point

— 3 hours, 33 min ago

Stone Hearts (War of the Underhill #0.5)

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Emma's In Stock is on page 187 of 206

Formatting error

— 3 hours, 22 min ago

Emma's In Stock is on page 176 of 206

Typo run-on

— 3 hours, 38 min ago

Emma's In Stock is on page 175 of 206

This sentence either needs an “in” or “through”, otherwise this sentence just reads weirdly

— 3 hours, 39 min ago

Emma's In Stock is on page 167 of 206

I’m pretty sure “blown apart boys” should be hyphenated bc it comes right before “boys”

— 3 hours, 48 min ago

Emma's In Stock is on page 166 of 206

Typo should be “blond” bc he’s male

— 3 hours, 51 min ago

Emma's In Stock is on page 165 of 206

Typo run-on

— 3 hours, 52 min ago

Emma's In Stock is on page 142 of 206

OKAY ROLEPLAY LMAO

— 4 hours, 14 min ago

Emma's In Stock is on page 127 of 206

“Far farther” reads awkwardly

— 4 hours, 28 min ago

Emma's In Stock is on page 120 of 206

DAMN 403 years later

— 4 hours, 39 min ago

Emma's In Stock is on page 109 of 206

Typo should be “subtlety” not “subtle”

— 4 hours, 51 min ago

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