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Typo missing question mark, unless this is being said in the inner monologue in a monotone way.

Ngl the amount of typos in this is ridiculous at this point

Typo run-on

This sentence either needs an “in” or “through”, otherwise this sentence just reads weirdly

I’m pretty sure “blown apart boys” should be hyphenated bc it comes right before “boys”

Typo should be “blond” bc he’s male

Typo run-on

OKAY ROLEPLAY LMAO

“Far farther” reads awkwardly

DAMN 403 years later

Typo should be “subtlety” not “subtle”