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Formatting error

Typo missing question mark, unless this is being said in the inner monologue in a monotone way.

Ngl the amount of typos in this is ridiculous at this point

Typo run-on

I’m pretty sure “blown apart boys” should be hyphenated bc it comes right before “boys”

Typo should be “blond” bc he’s male

Typo run-on

OKAY ROLEPLAY LMAO

“Far farther” reads awkwardly

DAMN 403 years later

Typo should be “subtlety” not “subtle”