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The Undead Situation (Undead #1)
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Eloise J. Knapp

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Lorre is finished

— Apr 13, 2021 05:31AM Add a comment

Lorre is 74% done

— Apr 12, 2021 06:04AM Add a comment

Lorre is 33% done

— Apr 11, 2021 05:44AM Add a comment

Paulekid is finished

— Oct 30, 2019 11:30AM Add a comment

Kimmyh is on page 89 of 232

— Jun 05, 2018 04:32AM Add a comment

Crystal is 78% done

The... accidentally saying you're in love during your narrative and then realizing it's true... cliché makes me extremely... extremely annoyed. And triggers my gag reflex. Will have to mark the whole thing down at least one point for that BS.

— Feb 18, 2017 01:28PM Add a comment

Crystal is 66% done

Cyrus forgets Pickle a whole bunch.
I hope he and Blaze kill each other massively... no! wait! Gabe should kill them.

In general, I think a final, machete rewrite would have done wonders, hack it to death and sew up the pieces with a more believable set of sociopathic main characters.

— Feb 18, 2017 03:02AM Add a comment

Crystal is 30% done

I read a review that mentioned, "show, don't tell!"

and now I can't unsee it... constantly. Also, I am so sick of women being weak and helpless in fiction. Perhaps I need to do something about myself just in case the Zs attack.

— Feb 17, 2017 07:41AM Add a comment

Crystal is 5% done

creeeepy

— Feb 16, 2017 07:05AM Add a comment

Joshua is 8% done

— Jun 01, 2015 07:56PM Add a comment

David is on page 35 of 282

— May 09, 2015 11:07AM Add a comment

Olk Lein Möpmöp is on page 250 of 282

— Apr 30, 2015 01:45AM Add a comment

Olk Lein Möpmöp is on page 100 of 282

— Apr 29, 2015 09:26AM Add a comment

Ignatz is 5% done

I've just started this book this morning and am already picking nits. To paraphrase Mark Twain: "Don't tell us the old lady screamed. Bring her on and let her scream!"

— Mar 25, 2015 10:53AM Add a comment