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Mel
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May 24, 2016 04:45PM Add a comment
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Dena
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Jo
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Jun 09, 2014 09:10PM Add a comment
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Jo
Jo is on page 132 of 230
I don't want to put this book down!
Jun 08, 2014 11:56PM Add a comment
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Jo
Jo is on page 53 of 230
First impression: Katie is such a childish and stubborn brat! Looks good so far though.
Jun 07, 2014 11:17PM Add a comment
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Amanda [darjeeling_and_jade]
Amanda [darjeeling_and_jade] is 58% done
So far I feel like this is just a love story with a tiny, tiny bit of paranormal thrown in as an afterthought. The main point of the novel (Kate using her powers to find the kid) isn't even on the back-burner, it's in the fridge. I wish that was more of a focus.

I also am increasingly feeling like the author is forcing the characters into a romance just to have a romance. It's very stilted.
Jan 15, 2014 05:28PM Add a comment
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Amanda [darjeeling_and_jade]
Amanda [darjeeling_and_jade] is 14% done
More infodumps. It bogs down the story. I also don't need all of these descriptions about people's appearances.
Jan 13, 2014 09:42PM Add a comment
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Amanda [darjeeling_and_jade]
Amanda [darjeeling_and_jade] is 14% done
Too much telling. The author shows the emotion etc but still feels the need to tell us. It's already shown, don't tell / ruin the emotion.
Jan 13, 2014 09:40PM Add a comment
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