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The Keepers (The Keepers Trilogy, #1)
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Sarah is on page 74 of 251

— Feb 17, 2014 01:59PM Add a comment

Henry is 69% done

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Henry is 27% done

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Henry is 17% done

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Sarah is on page 31 of 251

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Henry is 9% done

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Nádia is 93% done

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Nádia is 73% done

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Nádia is 63% done

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Nádia is 63% done

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Nádia is 34% done

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Nádia is 13% done

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Nádia is 19% done

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Candace is starting

Review due 19 Nov

— Nov 10, 2013 03:26PM Add a comment

Nemo (The ☾Moonlight☾ Library) is 38% done

Although the action scene is very clumsily written, shockingly passive and boring, I really like that Ava isn't suddenly granted magical powers. I like how she knows how useless she is and uses that to her advantage. And I like that she gets hurt - she doesn't suddenly come into some magical power or all her training leads to her 'magically' being a good fighter. So all in all, a good sequence.

— Oct 22, 2013 07:01PM Add a comment

Nemo (The ☾Moonlight☾ Library) is 30% done

— Oct 21, 2013 07:05PM Add a comment

Nemo (The ☾Moonlight☾ Library) is 25% done

The execution is clumsy but the enthusiasm is there and I can clearly see there is a wealth of talent that will be unearthed with more experience, and that's why I'm still reading.

— Oct 17, 2013 07:03PM Add a comment

Nemo (The ☾Moonlight☾ Library) is 20% done

Sometimes I'm not sure if it's fair to criticise new, inexperienced authors on the use of passive voice and telling, not showing. After all, they're just telling a story, right? What right do I have to demand they play by some arbitrary rules someone figured out makes a 'better' narrative? It's as bad as the person who decided Mary Sues need to die in a fire despite them featuring in the most popular YA books.

— Oct 16, 2013 06:52PM Add a comment

Nemo (The ☾Moonlight☾ Library) is 13% done

I still quite like Ava's bravery. She's incredibly well-adjusted for an eighteen year old.

— Oct 15, 2013 06:55PM Add a comment

Nemo (The ☾Moonlight☾ Library) is 6% done

I like Ava. She's quirky and proactive. Yay!

— Oct 14, 2013 07:08PM Add a comment