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Karen
is 70% done
Hmmm... good beginning, muddy middle, good ending in sight? I still think the story needs to breathe, 'cause I have no idea how all the characters know relate to each. But I also blame myself for possibly not paying enough attention.
— Jun 02, 2017 08:58PM
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Karen
is 58% done
Maybe I'm reading too fast, but I feel like I'm missing some things. I need more flesh.
— Jun 01, 2017 08:29PM
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Karen
is 40% done
I feel like this story is going by way too fast.
— May 30, 2017 08:24PM
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Karen
is 18% done
I feel like some parts are missing. If it's intentional, then it's intentional. But I don't feel like I'm reading a novel in the traditional sense. Maybe it's setting I'm missing?
— May 25, 2017 08:26PM
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Nicole
is on page 144 of 394
"Unslithered" is not a word. Tarantulas do not hang from aerial webs. Lots of omitted words and spelling/grammatical errors. It would be great if we could stick with a verb tense and not have 4 different characters giving 1st person POV.
— Mar 29, 2015 10:09PM
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Nicole
is on page 37 of 394
"Seizuring" is not a word, and cutesy spellings of words aren't really all that cute.
— Mar 29, 2015 02:04PM
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Norm Davis
is on page 293 of 394
Over the last 100+ pages I've been intrigued, but I've grown weary, then just angry at the author.
— Feb 22, 2015 01:36AM
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