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Roachie
is 74% done
Wow. Not getting any better. There are likeable elements, but the execution of those elements are really rough. This book should have been workshopped before publishing.
— Dec 25, 2016 03:53PM
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Roachie
is 42% done
I'm enjoying this story, but something is off about the flow. It brings to mind Charlaine Harris' Harper Connelly series, though I'm not sure why. (Similar tone?)
A quick scan of a page reveals an awful lot of "I" statements, but that's minor. Maybe it's too much direct action/description; not enough showing and too much telling?
— Dec 23, 2016 01:31PM
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A quick scan of a page reveals an awful lot of "I" statements, but that's minor. Maybe it's too much direct action/description; not enough showing and too much telling?
Mike
is 38% done
Even though it's a light, fast read, and not *bad*, per se, I'm struggling with this one. Maybe I'm just not in the mood for it?
— Oct 23, 2015 06:35PM
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Mike
is 5% done
Not sold on this one. The writing's decent so far, but I caught an inconsistency on the 2nd page...Not a good sign.
— Oct 22, 2015 07:58PM
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Samantha Lyle
is on page 187 of 276
I need a sequel...pretty bad actually lol. This book was awesome!
— Sep 20, 2015 08:47PM
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Samantha Lyle
is on page 170 of 276
This book is pretty great. I like the characters and the plot is pretty inventive. :)
— Sep 20, 2015 08:09PM
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Mara Valderran
is 43% done
Absolutely love this narrator. This book is so addictive.
— Dec 19, 2013 02:36PM
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