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Miyulinka
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Kind of choppy writing, with weird choices of words. "Carp out" for saying something sharply (ish?), "lapse my mouth" for going in for a kiss, "recites" for just saying something that most definitely isn't a recitation.
"Easton turns his concentration to..." uh no, you turn your focus or attention. All the weird word choices take away from from story.
— Feb 12, 2025 09:14AM
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"Easton turns his concentration to..." uh no, you turn your focus or attention. All the weird word choices take away from from story.
