Miyulinka’s Reviews > Pucking Around With A Grumpy Billionaire > Status Update

Kind of choppy writing, with weird choices of words. "Carp out" for saying something sharply (ish?), "lapse my mouth" for going in for a kiss, "recites" for just saying something that most definitely isn't a recitation.
"Easton turns his concentration to..." uh no, you turn your focus or attention. All the weird word choices take away from from story.