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Amy Orris
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Amy Orris
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Jen_C
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Writing style is bringing this down a bit. It is not a good sign when I am pulled out of the story trying to figure out if the logistics and details being given are actually possible. I find myself asking "is he Gumby?" " How did he lift he like that from that position?" I want to be engaged in the story not the minutiae.......
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Jen_C
Jen_C is 75% done
Good so far.
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Jen_C
Jen_C is 41% done
Harper is a bit abrupt and brash but hopefully she softens just enough to be likeable.
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Molly
Molly is 84% done
How the hell does a persons tattoo cast a shadow on another person skin? WTF?!
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Molly
Molly is 85% done
Boring, overly dramatic prose. Why you two words when you can use 17? Don't really much care about these people. Must everything hit them like a ton of bricks, a bold of lightening, a punch to the gut...ugh!
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Devika
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