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Dedra Cady
is on page 47 of 184
Chapters 9. Good so far. THE MMC and MFC are moving a bit fast for my taste but over all good book so far.
— Aug 30, 2026 01:17PM
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Brianne
is 71% done
It's very cookie cutter as far as novels in this genre go
— Sep 10, 2015 09:22PM
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Catherine
is 3% done
Using the word 'slut' within the first page of your novel does not put me in a good mindset to continue.
Including the cliched promiscuous best friend is not a point in your favour, especially when the main character is incredibly judgmental about it.
This book has not got off to a good start.
— Jan 20, 2015 04:28PM
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Including the cliched promiscuous best friend is not a point in your favour, especially when the main character is incredibly judgmental about it.
This book has not got off to a good start.














