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Catherine is 3% done
Using the word 'slut' within the first page of your novel does not put me in a good mindset to continue.

Including the cliched promiscuous best friend is not a point in your favour, especially when the main character is incredibly judgmental about it.

This book has not got off to a good start.
Jan 20, 2015 04:28PM
Crossing the Line (World Apart, 1)


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