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is 3% done
Using the word 'slut' within the first page of your novel does not put me in a good mindset to continue.
Including the cliched promiscuous best friend is not a point in your favour, especially when the main character is incredibly judgmental about it.
This book has not got off to a good start.
— Jan 20, 2015 04:28PM
Including the cliched promiscuous best friend is not a point in your favour, especially when the main character is incredibly judgmental about it.
This book has not got off to a good start.
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