Status Updates From Stormin' Norman (Lyon Road ...

Dnf. It's suddenly gone silly, and not in a good way. Shame really, because it was promising, despite the poor formatting.

This would be a hell of at lot more readable if there were spaces between paragraphs to denote changes in scene, time etc. I am constantly having to re-read parts to try to make sense of what is/has happened. It's irritating to say the least.