Status Updates From Burn Patterns (First in Lin...

Time of death: 38%
I cannot get past the repetition or the use of the word percise in all variations.

This had potential, but I give up at 26%.

This particular fictional world is entirely unbelievable. Who has their work firefighter gear and radio with them for a pre-dawn swim?
Who repeatedly touches their brand new work collegue without prior consent?
The writing is clumsy and trying too hard. Instalove histrionics and blatant unprofessionalism … Ugh, this is awful. Not even skipping to the end.

These plot holes are driving me batty. My notes are going to be 39 pages long at this point

How does the fire bug get into the fire station!!!! That's the first question ffs

I don't know about this. It feels like there's a lot missing, it's insta love without the MCs (or the reader lol) knowing anything about each other and there are things I find illogical