Status Updates From Unbreak Me

Editing!!!!
Spelling and grammatical errors are making this incredibly hard to read.

Lack of punctuation still prevalent, bothersome!!! Story line is good, too bad grammar is distracting and pulls one's attention from the story to the miswritten words.

Story is good -- opening chapter with Kyle pretty raw. Should have included peek into the 1st year after to understand Ari's freak out near other males. Too, too may grammatical errors. Wish people would learn how to use commas or simply not use run-on sentences. Editing needed throughout.

Sooo far the book is great.... It has a strong story line in the first few chapters......... Just excited to read the rest.......