Status Updates From Bond Arsenal 2

...And another author sin from the last book rears its ugly head: have all the men that are not authority figures be complete jackasses. In this case, it's the men from the Squares squadron.

I'm starting to see the same problems that plagued the first book. Grammatical errors regarding multiple quotes said by the same character, a head hop, and single-sentence "paragraphs" that ought to be merged together. There was some degree of character growth but not development, and the first sex scene was pretty lackluster.