MathematicianLive413’s Reviews > Bond Arsenal 2 > Status Update
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I'm starting to see the same problems that plagued the first book. Grammatical errors regarding multiple quotes said by the same character, a head hop, and single-sentence "paragraphs" that ought to be merged together. There was some degree of character growth but not development, and the first sex scene was pretty lackluster.
— Jun 18, 2025 08:47AM
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...And another author sin from the last book rears its ugly head: have all the men that are not authority figures be complete jackasses. In this case, it's the men from the Squares squadron.
— Jun 18, 2025 03:52PM
