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Kamas Kirian is 73% done

the story has moved along nicely, good fast pace. still the problem of sudden jumps in descriptions that lead to go back and reread the previous few lines a few times to sort things out, but not as many, and I'm sort of expecting it now.

— Jan 11, 2016 09:41PM Add a comment

Kamas Kirian is 37% done

So far fairly interesting. The gang is finally all together and working towards one end. The big downfall of the story so far has been how it jumps around. At first I thought I had missed something, but turning the page back showed it just jumped from one part of the story to another.

— Jan 06, 2016 09:23PM Add a comment

Tamara is 73% done

— Feb 26, 2012 07:40PM Add a comment

Tamara is 60% done

— Feb 26, 2012 04:42PM Add a comment

Dayl Thomas is on page 151 of 352

On chapter 9, page 114 out of 266 (or 151 out of 352).

— Jun 28, 2011 11:53AM Add a comment

Dayl Thomas is on page 114 of 352

On chapter 9, page 114 out of 266.

— Jun 28, 2011 11:52AM Add a comment