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Jason Ashmore
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The days in and I'm not sure I can go much further! The writing is bland and verbose: every tiny detail is explained immediately, some concepts have taken over a page. Nothing is left for the reader to discover or work through for themself.
And the mistakes:grammatical and spelling... My goodness! I recognise that a few will get past even the best editors, but there are so many: three or four on most pages!
— Apr 25, 2026 03:03AM
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And the mistakes:grammatical and spelling... My goodness! I recognise that a few will get past even the best editors, but there are so many: three or four on most pages!
